25th Feb 12 - 16:58
Not to bad mate :)
I myself would of included;
- The use of the UNGL logo, as that is the main thing it should be attracting the viewers to.
- A small part of the video should show viewers, some of the UNGL website, maybe showing past cups, and remember to obviously focas it on the LoL section of the website.
- A link of some kind thats not just in the description of the video.
- From 0.07 to 0.27 bores the hell out of me. I've played lol before, and I'm always playing hon and dota2 but that 20 second clip shows nothing but a casual fight with a few phrases popping onto the screen. Try a move eventful but less busy clip.
- Is there no way to get rid of the HUD and the typing, makes it look messy.
It's actually not to bad, but as others have said, it doesn't look at all like a decent promo video, more like just a video showing the gameplay of what LoL is like. Great work on it though, and I'm sure you can improve/make a new one that is tons better than this. Remember this is my opinion only. If anyone doesn't like my opinion, then I shall challenge you to a race to see how long you can hold your breath for. I always win.